I think it would work fine. You might have the weight issue mentioned above.
Now a question:
Do your original cars have 2 wheel trucks, or just 2 axles? And do the passenger cars really have 4 wheel trucks, or 4 axle in 2 two rail trucks?
I am think your originals are like bobber cabooses, simply 2 axles and the passenger have a 2 axle truck at each end.