Roger,
Thanks much for your suggestions! I will definitely wrap them back into the text later today. If you have a photograph showing the specific oiling points and type of oil, that would be useful.
Regarding the train building process, I wanted to suggest the easiest and straightforward method of getting the set to run. When I first tried adding the Bistro Car through the train build process, I thought it was a bit unwieldy and frankly unnecessary. But I will relook at it to see if a set of steps can be documented to make it work properly.
Thanks again.