Yes, I like it! Your added siding on the right may prevent you from running the mainline behind the village in a tunnel though. I like your sense of whimsy in your concept. I keep that in my layouts. Church with cemetery including skeletons, glowing toxic waste spill with Creature from the Black Lagoon emerging from the ooze, T Rex skeleton embedded in cliffside excavation. Kids from 3 to 93 love it.
Chris Sheldon