Suzanne, glad to hear sales are good. Selling is something I know I wouldn't do myself because I just like my stuff. I'd say though that there are the self evident rules to follow(common sense) and you seem to be doing just that.
I notice in my browsing of items on eBay, that for each seller there is some common things, and some not. Generally people will put either few item details or extremely detailed. Some people don't have a photo of their item which to me would be not something I'd consider.
The photos you have above I would say are on par with what I usually look at. Regardless of how you arrange the items(tender backwards or forward) I wouldn't think would matter as it is pretty obvious which way after looking at it which way it would go together. Going forward for you the best advice is coming from your fellow OGR members, don't hesitate to ask questions when you are wanting advice.
