I saw another "S" curve and I don't think we needed the second switch on the escape.
BTW. I also rotated the layout 90° and resized the work space. My old eyes have a hard time when the longest dimensions are on the Y axis instead of the X axis. Feel free to ignore it and make any changes to your file.
FWIW, I only raised 2 daughters and my wife did most of that because I spent way too many hours at work or TDY.