Train Verse (a rhyme in tyme #1)

           

Nicely done my friend very nicely done

 

No bump intended, but added a verse, changed title.

Dang it, I get immersed in building a new display and miss all the fun stuff.

I must have missed something too... added verse? The one I see works by itself. I don't really get what could have been added. Could someone clue me in? 

As the author, I will clue you in.  I created a group of verses, and what I thought was a humorous bit of writing.  There seemed to be little interest in my efforts.  Yesterday A.M. I did add a verse, but the lack of interest caused my to take it down.  Perhaps, it was not to the general liking of the membership, or, perhaps not.  I'm never quite sure when there are no responses from the group that usually responds to most everything posted, controversial or bland.  

 

I have decided to limit my activities on the site to what seems to be the norm.  As far as creative writing, I'll find another venue.

 

Dear Bob, Please don't take my lack of response as rejection, it's just that I have been busy and have not the time to make myself merry by reading your prose! I truly find your poem that you posted on Wednesday in the Midweek Haiku to be simply amazing and flabbergasting! I hope your passion for poems is one day published, if it were, I would buy a copy! Oops! Mike Maurice

Bob I have been out because of my wife being in the hospital with Kidney Failure

I enjoyed your Prose

it is entertainment  and quite addictive so please go on and repost the original

regardless of whether you get respones or not some of us will read and post you must be patioent

 

Don't let my confusion, or lack of response stop you. Sometimes the silence after a concert is a more powerful recognition than the applause could ever be.

REPOSTED for those who requested, and any other interested folks.  Please enjoy.

 

Bob

Severin lays down

Verse after verse of witty 

train rhymes!  Holy cow!   

 

- Mike

appreciated very much keep it coming

Mike and Bob keep this going it is a very welcome distraction

from my horrendous life at the moment

 

ahhh yes, sorry I missed the first posting. But then again having your catchy little ditty spinning through my head while working out clearances on a double helix I probably would have gotten too dizzy and passed out.

Thanks for reposting Bob. I often look towards your posts for entertainment.

Well, we can't have that.  If you don't get it right, your trains will go spinning off into infinity or train heaven.